Invisable

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  • Lost Love
    • JoJoChick
    • Life is truely what you make of it. So, make it good!!!! :)

    Invisable

    I see you walking down the street, in the park, even sitting next to me in class.
    The question is... Do you notice me?
    If not, will you notice me?
    Now, in the future, or even in the past.
    I sit here and wonder... Is it just me?
    Or is it the fact everyone else sees me as invisable?
    As invisable as a ghost on Halloween night.
    There is ony one thing I want in life.
    That thing is you. I think of you before I go to sleep at night.
    I think of you when times go bad.
    I think of you when all to think about is you.
    There is nothing else I'd rather do to take up time in life.
    Rather it be my favorite hobbies or my spending-time with friends.
    You pretend I'm not there. That I dont exist.
    That everything that sits around you, that moves intentionally and unintentionally, should revolve around you.
    It's love that should revolve around you, me, your family, my family, your friends and mine, everyone.
    When you think of love... think of me.
    Then maybe, just maybe, I will exist to you.

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    dahlusion commented on Invisable

    02-26-2009

    "When you think of love... think of me" —— you are, with out a doubt, a poet.

    markrohaley commented on Invisable

    01-20-2009

    very nice young lady. you may want to read 'Alone'...I think you will enjoy it as much as I did your beautiful words!

    allenjermy commented on Invisable

    12-24-2008

    I like how you wrote this one. creative. Keep it up, this one is very good...Don Folks

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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