If You Love....

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    • JoJoChick
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    If You Love....

    He made her jealous
    On purpose, he tried.
    When the girl asked,"Do you love me?"
    On purpose he lied.
    he played with jealousy
    Like it was a game.
    Little did he know
    Things would never be the same.
    His plan was working
    But he had no clue.
    How wrong things would go,
    The damage he would do.
    One night she broke down,
    Feeling very alone.
    Just her and the blade,
    No one else home.
    She dialed his number,
    He answered,"Hello?"
    She told him she loved him
    And hung up the phone.
    He raced to her house
    Just a minute to late.
    He found her lying in blood,
    Her heart had no rate.
    Beside her was a note,
    In it her confession.
    Her love for this boy,
    Her only obsession.
    As he read the note,
    He knelt down and cried.
    Grabbed her knife,
    That night they both died.
    She was found in his arms,
    Both of them dead.
    Under her note
    His handwriting said:

    "I loved her.
    So she never knew.
    All this time
    I loved her, too."

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    badgerbutterfly commented on If You Love....

    05-14-2009

    Jojo, This is one brought tears to my eyes. Excellent writing alot of feeling...ANd touches my heart dearly....Keep up the good work..

    allenjermy commented on If You Love....

    12-24-2008

    This one very intense, very good. I like how you wrote it...Don Folks

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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