Innocent

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  • Lost Love
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  • Dark Poetry
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  • Confusion

    Innocent

     Sharp pointed painted finger nail
    Cutting across a look of disgust
    Rust; the colour of your eyes
    Dead and conceited. my aura, defeated
    Words in my head can't be repeated
    I leave

    Tongue twisted, actions resisted...
    Suitcase of memories, filled with ease
    Ready to be cast away to fate
    Missed the bus, too late
    Stranded at the gate, in the terminal
    It's terminal

    Tender touch cuts with ease
    Blood congeals
    Violent whispers, heated shivers
    Fiery arrows in your quiver
    Ready to pierce my liver
    My innocence

    Write to me, in your diary
    Things you never said to me
    Then kill me swiftly
    You make me nervous
    And i'm innocent

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    graceladymn commented on Innocent

    09-26-2009

    Difficult to tell in this poem who and what your writing of. But, is clear on the picture of one who accuses and how it feels to be accused, I think we've all been there wrongly accused. The poem gives one trouble in responding because, its vague on details. And if it is true that your innocent of what your being accused of it would make sense to talk directly with the person who is accusing you rather than make a general statement hoping someone can pick up cues that might be missed. Confusion is coming through, let me know if you find a way to be clearer, I'd be glad to re-read and re-rate it.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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