I'm Broken

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    • davidm26
    • just trying to post some new poems for everyone to enjoy!!

    I'm Broken

    I used to always know where I was going
    It was so fun always knowing
    Everything that lay on the path ahead of me
    The path that, you and I for miles, could clearly see
    We trekked along that road for a long while
    Overcoming obstacles still hand in hand for all those miles
    Sometimes I thought we could never reach that point of being totally fed up
    Then we reached a spot on that road that just got too rough
    I had to make the decision to stop, that we had had enough
    Something powerful ruined our road and we had to put an end to our love
    Now I’m broken
    Goodbye has already been spoken
    And the time we shared can't be frozen
    The love we made has been stolen
    That's why I’m broken
    I’m broken
    These days, I just don't care where I’m going
    The true reason for our loves demise I'll never end up knowing
    I believe in only getting that one chance
    If you fail, try to move on, and leave that loss in the past
    Now we know it takes so much more than just love
    To make it last forever with that special someone
    Now we move on down different roads
    Where we'll end up we'll never know
    We do know that our paths will never cross to give us back what once was
    Only in memory can we relive the sweet beauty of our love
    Now I’m broken
    Goodbye has already been spoken
    And the time we shared can't be frozen
    The love we made has been stolen
    That's why I’m broken
    I’m broken

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    oreo5560 commented on I'm Broken

    09-28-2009

    another heartfelt poem--I could really relate to these words and emotions!

    am2anangel commented on I'm Broken

    06-02-2009

    excellent poem displaying our inability to turn back time and get the moments we want back,instead of appreciating what we have when we have it. A very passionate piece about a lost love. very well written and expressed.

    drewking commented on I'm Broken

    01-10-2009

    felt this one,, i've been there.... good oiece of work..

    PoeticMind commented on I'm Broken

    12-01-2008

    SOO SSOOO DEEP BUT I CAN RELATE

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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