I Wish...

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    my poem to one of my boyfriends......

    I Wish...

     I widh it were different.
    I wish I loved you.
    I wish i could change how it happens.
    I wish you wouldn' be sad.
    I wish you'd listen to me.
    I wish you made me happy.
    I wish you'd understand...
    but guess what?
    Wishes don't always come true.
    I wish these do..
    I wish...

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    Viper89 commented on I Wish...

    03-09-2011

    It's sound like a poem I wrote in the 6th grade! Not your best but still a good poem! 7 out of 10 sorry!
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    TaCoNiNjA35F00

    03/09/2011

    all good..I appreciate the feedback:)

    TaCoNiNjA35F00 commented on I Wish...

    02-23-2011

    This isn't really one of my best poems... pretty wack actually but i was in kind of a blurred mood when i wrote this so I wasn't aware of what I was writing. I just grabbed a pen and paper and this came up
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    sanctus commented on I Wish...

    02-21-2011

    Great piece of writing..........................................................
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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