Because of You

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  • Lost Love
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  • Loss

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    My very first poem. Hope you like it:)

    Because of You

     Because of you i'm nothing but a shell
    You left me hollow and broken.
    Because of you, i'm going to burn in hell
    Because of you i cried for days
    Because of you i moved away
    Because of you, for me, there is no tomorrow
    Because of you, I shot myself
    and now you're drowning in sorrow
    Because of you, i'm dead,
    Today i wouldn't be,
    If u hadn't said goodbye
    To me

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    Ninjaboy commented on Because of You

    02-18-2011

    no words can define this one, atleast none i can think of................................10 here
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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