I Wish I Was A Star

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    I Wish I Was A Star

    I wish I was a star just hanging,

    Chilling long side the

    Moon..

    I wish I may I wish I might just

    Chilling with the heavenly stars

    Neighbors

    I wish I may I wish I might make you

    My perfect friends

    Just hanging, chilling shooting the

    Breeze..

    I wish I may I wish I might gaze down

    From the blacken

    Skies…

    Scattering gold dust around your feet

    I wish I may I wish I might make

    Friends with the

    Moon ...


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    countrypoet commented on I Wish I Was A Star

    03-15-2009

    Nice metaphors;very clever storyline.I really like this poem.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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