I Know How You Feel, I Was Hurt Just Like You

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    This was about my current love, although when this was written we had just started dating. We both really liked each other, but he was a little shy. It seemed as though he had created that shy wall to not get hurt because of something that had happened in the past, my assumption was correct:o. I had written this for him to show him I could write and to show him I knew what he was feeling and going through, without him having to say a word about it. :o

    I Know How You Feel, I Was Hurt Just Like You

     Scared and alone,
    Mind wondering, yearing for another souls company.
    Your feelings flow through your fingertips,
    Allowing them to be heard.
    Bottled Emotion,
    Afraid to let it spill?
    The other side of you is closer than you believe.
    Your timidness shows strength as hers shows fear,
    Her speach is a defence as yours is only a way to reach out your gentle hand.
    Grey eyes draw me in.
    After our lips meet I sway back in childish laughter.
    Something may grow, don't be alarmed.
    Lit it happen, let her in.
    I'm more like you thank you think.

    ~H.C. 

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