Could We Be Falling For Each Other?

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    My feelings for this boy started to grow with each day. I finally got to the point where I needed to tell him how much he already meant to me. But with hope, I had wrote him this. I read it to him and he was amazing. The more I wrote, the more he opened up. Showing him my feelings the only way I know how to truly express them was the exact way he needed to be told them. We became quite close very quickly. Then before you know it, this comfort came over us. Now we feel like no matter what happens, nothings ever awkward. We talk all of our issues out. This is probably the best relationship I've ever had.. Maybe even the happiest I've ever been..<3

    Could We Be Falling For Each Other?

     See like me.
    I draw you in as I whisper sweet words.
    You must allow your mind to grow.
    You're more creative than you see yourself to be.
    The quiet minds are always the best to venture into.
    Much like a road that has been left untraveled.
    Your gaze wonders.
    Searching your thoughts perhaps?
    Am I there? Whem in reality I'm 15 min away.
    Just listen to my hushed feelings.
    You'd be surprised how much of me has never been shown.
    So draw all of me out.
    We can feel what we haven't before. 
    I allow you to make me feel.
    But the question still remains,
    Are you ready?

    ~H.C. 

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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