I Am The Sun...

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Nature

    I Am The Sun...
    I am the sun. I am bright.
    I am loved, in return I provide light. 
    I rise every morning, set every night.
    While I’m awake, I bring delight.
    I live my life way up high.
    Above everybody, my face in the sky.
    If you misuse me you will see,
    What a nuisance I can be.
    I can do things you wouldn’t assume.
    Bring you love and care, or pain and gloom.
    Give you a high, cause you to die.
    And other things you’ve yet to find.
    I‘ve been cursed for evermore, 
    To go round and round to stop nevermore.
    Unless I shall die you’ll see everyday my face in the sky,
    Friend or foe, you decide.
    I am the sun. I am bright.
    I am loved, in return I provide light. 
    I rise every morning, set every night.
    While I’m awake, I bring delight.
    I live my life way up high.
    Above everybody, my face in the sky.
    If you misuse me you will see,
    What a nuisance I can be.
    I can do things you wouldn’t assume.
    Bring you love and care, or pain and gloom.
    Give you a high, cause you to die.
    And other things you’ve yet to find.
    I‘ve been cursed for evermore, 
    To go round and round to stop nevermore.
    Unless I shall die you’ll see everyday my face in the sky,
    Friend or foe, you decide.

    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    ClearlySays commented on I Am The Sun...

    01-28-2011

    Very clever, the way you wrapped it up. I've heard people personify the sun but not the way you did. Friend or foe an interesting way to describe the sun's effects, this inspires me to read some more of your work!
    Reply to Comment

    ClearlySays

    01/28/2011

    woops once you upload some more lol

    LenaM commented on I Am The Sun...

    01-28-2011

    oh I like this poem through all I do is freckle and burn in the sun :)
    Reply to Comment

    Rhymer commented on I Am The Sun...

    01-28-2011

    Excellent piece, need the vitamin D but need to protect from those harmful rays. 10
    Reply to Comment

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    Murles29’s Poems (6)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    This Ledge... 0 02/01/2011
    Stolen Voices 0 02/01/2011
    Sidewalk of Life 0 02/01/2011
    He Walks Alone 0 01/31/2011
    Forget Me not 1 01/29/2011
    I Am The Sun... 3 01/28/2011

    Murles29’s Friends (3)

    Top of Page