High School Low

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    High School Low

    The world is buzzing around me,
    but I cannot seem to care.
    The chaos that surrounds me
    is a snowflake in the air.
    I walk along this lonesome hallway
    that is fulled to the brim.
    Everyone seems to come my way,
    as the lights begin to dim.
    I am frightened in this sanctuary,
    where joyful voices can be heard.
    This burden I am left to carry
    is my only connection to the herd.
    The greatest years of my life,
    or so they all believe,
    Turns out to be a terrible strife,
    from which I long to leave.

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    xxlheart commented on High School Low

    04-01-2009

    this is an excellent poem. you should submit this to teen magazines.

    dahlusion commented on High School Low

    02-10-2009

    Beautifully emotional — poetry got me through this period of my life also. Write "all" of your thoughts down, leaving nothing out .

    WordSlinger commented on High School Low

    02-09-2009

    Dont be in a hurry to grow up, but keep the grip of your talent tight.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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