Help Me!

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    Help Me!

     The birds cry out, can you hear?
    Time seems frozen do you care?
    I look out the window, yet I can not see.
    Help me please!
    Oh, wait your not there,
    you don't care.
    You left me so long ago,
    but at last I am still alone.

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    redbloodink commented on Help Me!

    02-07-2010

    a cry of help..... not great but well heard..... red
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    Rygar commented on Help Me!

    01-18-2010

    not your strongest work, but i like the premise here. i think you should develop it more :)
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    Redrose77

    02/04/2010

    i know its not my best but hey we all have our days. lol

    Rygar

    02/04/2010

    its a good poem, but you are a great poet. ;) dont forget that :)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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