Break the Cycle

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    Break the Cycle

    Life is never easy,
    mistakes will be made.
    But it's the long waiting,
    that drives me insane.
    I site here wide awake,
    waiting for the call.
    But when the phone doesnt ring,
    I hang my head and bawl.
    I feel like time is slipping,
    and there's so much more to say.
    I don't want to be alone anymore,
    release me from my pain.
    I cherish every moment that you spend with me,
    but you don't seem to realize that you is all i need.
    Break the cycle of the tears, please stay by my side,
    you are all i ever wanted my soulmate and my guide.

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    Rygar commented on Break the Cycle

    01-18-2010

    a sense of longing emanates from this one, the only thing i noticed was the line "but you don't seem to realize that that you is all i need." it seems there is an extra "that" in there. nice job.

    Redrose77

    02/06/2010

    i finally fixed the line u were talking about. Thanks:)

    samuelj commented on Break the Cycle

    09-29-2009

    I know the feeling of wanting the comfort of another....needing someone is so mindboggling but I feel your pain of wanting...another touch is such comfort in time of need

    Redrose77

    10/01/2009

    Thank you so much for the feedback. Glad you understand

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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