He Saved Me

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    He Saved Me

    In my dreams, I whimper.
    In my heart, I cry.
    In my life, I'll die.
    I'm trying a little too hard to hold on to what
    doesn't exist; a future.
    So what am I doing here.?!
    Trying to do the best i can to avoid death.
    In a white cloke, is an angel awaiting.
    Am I dead....? I ask myself.
    And as i respond, I walk towards the person in the white cloke,
    they tell me, "You are dead."
    So as I stop with such suddence,
    I listen to voices....they are calling my name.
    So I open my eyes, and I see his face.
    There is no doubt that,
    ....He saved me.

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    dksamuri commented on He Saved Me

    02-28-2010

    i like this, it rings with me, for thier was a girl who saved me, even if it was only to kill me herself later

    Ivelisse

    03/18/2010

    Wow, im sorry. I'm working on another piece similar to this. I'll keep you posted. If you related to this one, you'll relate to my new one. This one isn't that good. But i appreciate your comment. Thank you.

    sammia commented on He Saved Me

    02-12-2010

    Beautifully written, the flow is great, felt the emotions that flowed throughout this piece.

    Ivelisse

    02/12/2010

    Thank you. I appreciate you comment.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    Ivelisse’s Poems (24)

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    Deliberate Beauty 2
    It Killed Her 2
    False 5
    Mad Person 4
    Failure 1
    Time is Lost 2
    He Saved Me 2
    Lost Angel 3
    Whisper 1
    Darkness of Enlightenment 1
    Blank 2
    Change Me 1
    New Years Loner 1
    She's the Perfect Definition 7
    It's No Longer A Dream 1
    No Such Thing 1
    Death Note 3
    Don't Promise Me 1
    Silence 1
    Save me 2
    Afraid 1
    Anna's Story 2
    A Mother's Love Denied 1
    Fantasy Boy 0