It Killed Her

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Ana: Anorexia Mia:Bolemia Ed: Eating Disorder

It Killed Her

She couldn't breathe, even with the given chance of a renaissance.

She was already gone...

 

It was the way they stared at her that made her imagine it.

Names they labeled her that made her consider it.

Events that took place that made her accomplish it.

The way they destroyed her that made it that much unusual,

barely anyone noticed she was gone.

 

For a moment they knew she was nearby.

For that emptiness they felt, knowing she wasn't.

 

As regards to her fatality the thought formerly matted with her existence creating a wicked aspiration.

She couldn't give in to temptations for the lord would not have forgiven her.

As to the following of her death not taken by her own hands shall she be given the gift of eternal life?

But just for the desire to be everlastingly numb nearly killed her mentality to reason.

Nevermore shall she fail?

Hath she been given the apple of life?

She has surrendered. Hence, she has departed from earth.

Leaving a memoir she once embraced.

But I can assure you, it was the them that killed her.

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Amaranth commented on It Killed Her

12-25-2010

"But just for the desire to be everlastingly numb nearly killed her mentality to reason. " -

Rhymer commented on It Killed Her

10-15-2010

A totally eveloping poems that devours you as you read. An excellent write 10 from me.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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