Haiku - Clouds
Watching clouds go by
Building mountains in the sky
And castles of white
Haiku - Clouds
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litilraven commented on Haiku - Clouds
08-20-2010
- From reading the other Haikus, I'm not as fond of this one near as much. I'm not real sure why exactly....it seems kind of bland in a way... like, it's too much sky going on or something?? lol, I know I'm not expressing this well either!
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08/20/2010
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