Giving In

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    Giving In

    Deep inside my heart gone cold. Locked away where no one goes. My secrets are my own disgrace, hidden away in my secret place. You say you want to know who I am, all about me and where we stand. Hurt has been my only life. Loving just to be stabbed by the knife. He told me that he loved me and that he cared. Then he walked away like i'd always feared. He said he had another, and that she was his world. That I was just a sling, and a silly stupid girl. That day my heart grew bitter, colder with every word. I realized that love its just a stupid word. I put up my guard where it remains today. To never be hurt or left a stray. Now I don't want to love you and I don't want to care. You want it so badley that It feels me with fear. You make me want something that I said I'd never want again. I don't want to believe you, but I feel myself giving in.

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    Chrisjan commented on Giving In

    06-02-2009

    To hear these words, from one so young, the hurt + pain, from inside your soul. You are not stupid, in any way, you have a gift to share, with a special person one day ! Thanks for sharing + don't give up !

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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