Forgotten

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    • Allie
    • In Love and ready to start writting again.

    Forgotten

     I'll be right back is all I hear
    left alone with no one there.
    Forgotten as always, but its okay
    I'll find away to face each day.
    In the background I fear to remain
    no will see my tears of pain.
    I rather be alone than to face
    the heartache of being replaced.

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    sweetjuliet commented on Forgotten

    06-28-2009

    You know, I can definitely define with this powm..I know the feeling of this A LOT!!
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    sweetjuliet

    06/28/2009

    i meant poem*

    MsKrystle commented on Forgotten

    06-09-2009

    Wow, you said so much in such a short poem. I like this. Do you mean being replaced in a relationship? If so, I think alot of people have that fear too.
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    Allie

    06/10/2009

    It is about being replaced....That love was so shallow that you could be erased for quickely.

    wildpendigus commented on Forgotten

    06-02-2009

    Dear Allie, I think you're a talented writer. I think you have potential to be become a great songwriter and poet, from dealing with motown, capital records. etc you have good stories which lyric are based upon, Congratulations grecowong@yahoo.com
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    Allie

    06/05/2009

    I just posted a new poem I hope you like this one as well

    wildpendigus

    06/28/2009

    I will check it out please email me so we can talk about doing some music grecowong@yahoo.com

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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