Fire Burning
The fire burnsAnd smells of sweet smoke
At it's fiery embers
I do poke
Fire Burning
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And smells of sweet smoke
At it's fiery embers
I do poke
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Tempestlady commented on Fire Burning
08-07-2009
- It sort of transfixes, and almost puts you in a trance the way the flames flicker and dance. Beautiful, reminds me of being bored on a hunting trip as a child, and roasting marshmallows, and hot dogs tryng to pass the time in some way. Like your simple, clear, direct style. write on.....
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