Finished

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    • Adara
    • taken by a man who is not always around but is always in my heart

    Finished

     I'm done trying so hard.
    I give everything and yet recieve nothing
    I try and I try
    to do my best
    to make the best grades
    and to be the best person.

    But it doesn't do any good.
    I still am not good enough.
    I don't have to nicest things
    don't dress a certain way
    and don't act the way others think I should.

    I try to give everything I have
    not wanting anything back
    but it is hard to have that mentality
    to know that because you are like that
    people are going to walk all over you.

    I'm finished with this world
    and the two faced people in it.
    It's not worth the constant pain
    of knowing what people do
    or how they think.

    So I'm finished with this life
    and everything in it.

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    Papa commented on Finished

    06-22-2010

    I think I wrote a poem with a similar title. It's never really finished. You want it to be, but it's always a part of you. learn from it and grow. Life can be a wonderful thing. You just have to know where to look. Don't let fools ruin things for you. You deserve the best from life. Go get it.
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    bforibus commented on Finished

    05-28-2009

    i was just illustrating the other day that the want for things and people drive the ones that dont have to all sorts of emotions, but i also said the ones that do have, the security drives most to greed. a never ending process of pain is what i say. great job painting the picture of that pain.
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    cherlemarie commented on Finished

    05-27-2009

    Some poems speak from imagination while others may simply tell a story but this poem (forgive me if I'm wrong) seems to speak from the heart. Your poem hearts my heart and me concern for you. Dear God, I hope you're just writing off steam because if you're giving up at the start of your race then to much attention is on things and people while very little is on you. Don't hold people so close, there are less scare on you when you do that. Believe me I know. I do love your openness and would
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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