Feeling Alone Within Yourself

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Feeling Alone Within Yourself

 Why is it that some, not many thrive through the air instead of slowing down.

 Why is it that evertime I am here,
        
             I feel so alone

              yet I am not.

 Why is it that everytime I try to fulfill my dreams

                  things or people try to block it

                      and make you feel low.

 Why is it that everyone questions you when you try harder and harder
                      
                     on one thing and they make it seem 
                                      
                                      like you never tried.

  Why is it that people just judge you by your appearance alone,
                   
          other than the character of the person that matters.

  Why is it that some people judge you 
                                   
                                   for being you.

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susanismith commented on Feeling Alone Within Yourself

08-03-2009

You can drive yourself crazy asking why or you can just realize that their is a lot of ugliness out there. Especially if you are the one trying so hard to do the right thing...Enjoyed your poem! I felt the hurt and confusion. Thanks.

Richisfun commented on Feeling Alone Within Yourself

06-17-2009

Nice poem, people are selfish and they dont really want you to be better, so be the BEST you can be and get them back.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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