Father Of Love

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  • KAWK
  • Thinking about writting a new poem about strength

Poem Commentary

I love this.This is how I fee.The loud beats mean the people in the world.

Father Of Love

For he is the one
For he who be
The Father Of Love
For sure the one
Who holds the white dove
For he the man who never lies
For sure the one who clears up cries
For He who needs
To be the lead
No matter and his faces
The loud beats 
For he is the one who never doubts 
For he is the one who
Smiles our thoughts
For the one 
who hears all
To the one who creates the 
The White falls
No matter if you are here or there
The Father Of Love 
Will be near 




                                Love
                                          KAWK 

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Musicmynded1 commented on Father Of Love

03-04-2011

I like the style of the writing, the wonderful words within', its a great piece.

1990lh commented on Father Of Love

07-18-2009

wow that was a really great poem very beautiful poem great write

KAWK

07/20/2009

Thanks so was yours

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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