Event in Time

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A poem that Ive had for a long time now.  Each time I read it...,and reflect on it, inspires the same feeling as the day I wrote it.  Thats what I love about poetry.  Im not going to give away the meaning, or the inherent stucture.  Ill leave it to the reader to interpret it in their own way. 

Event in Time

We are born into life...,

into the magical wonder of being.

Each of us,

a star in a galactic dance,

a flower reaching for the sun,

a raindrop in the wind,

an event in time,

everlasting.

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geminiSoFYE commented on Event in Time

06-05-2009

it was a legendary even in time when you wrote this and i will forever be inspired by it.You are such an extraordinay writer & i hope to lean much by your work

dahlusion commented on Event in Time

06-05-2009

"everlasting" — without a doubt, we are everlasting within the pulsing energy of eternity. This is a poetic gem!

dewachen commented on Event in Time

06-05-2009

Short and too the point, life is definitely very deep and the universe a teaching machine keep up the good work.

jenifer commented on Event in Time

06-04-2009

short,to the point and yet still very imagitive, good work , keep writing. and thanks for the comment.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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