elements

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    elements

    "elements"

    i want to live free,
    like a wind i come as i flee.
    like water replenished thirst,
    when trapped making it's way like a bubble burst.
    like earth, habitat of unusual species,
    so deep you can't understand the lest.
    like fire giving birth to the furnaces,
    to warmth hearts coldness and caresses.
    like love a wondrous sensibility,
    powerful force among elements reality.

    arpee'06

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    Bluestarboi commented on elements

    05-19-2009

    I enjoyed this very much, i love nature writings, i do ALOT of nature writings, i feel as though i can relate to nature in alot of ways. I like how you explained yourself with nature and how ur words just flowed very well written.

    arpee

    07/15/2009

    tyvm..

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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