Dreams Come True

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WAAAAY out from the LP-ness. bad day ya know

Dreams Come True

"Dreams do come true" is what i think

standing, smiling atop a burning heap

of human fleah and buildings ruined

this is what i've been waiting for

oh yes look how the moon blocks the sun

how like the day this life is done

so beautiful the city burns

yes, burn for me tonight

You always said you wanted to be like a star

so have fun again and crash into this earth

destroy it! destroy me! destroy yourself

shhh wasnt this your dream?
wasnt this what you wanted?

tell me, tell me if you can still speak

have your dreams come true my love?
did i give you your dream?

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Ydorj commented on Dreams Come True

09-01-2009

Would make a nice short story too. Very illustrative. Thank You.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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