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    My words feel like stones

    I just keep choking down

    My thoughts feel like bones

    Crumbling under the pressure

    I try to speak, all that comes are groans

    I fall down, deep down

    Into a sweet, nothingness drone

    Into a great leisure

    In the background sweet, sweet tones

    As I fall down, down, down…….

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    am2anangel commented on Down

    01-07-2012

    great descriptive write full of passionate loss. well done. -Tonya
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    windsongs commented on Down

    01-07-2012

    Proverbs 24:14 Know that wisdom is such to your soul; if you find it, there will be a future, and your hope will not be cut off. A friend told me this in another way! Theres hope for today!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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