Deserted

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    Deserted

    The moon has left my night sky

    So dark, bland, and plain.

    There is nothing to motivate my mind

    And I am left unentertained.

     

    The stars have left my night sky

    Empty, unlit, and demure.

    There is nothing to accompany my thoughts

    And I am left alone and insecure.

     

    The crickets have left the rustling trees

    So as not to orchestrate a tune.

    There is nothing to evoke my desire

    And I am left unamused.

     

    The cool breeze has left the rustling trees

    So as not to touch my skin.

    There is nothing to soothe my passion

    And I am left burning within.

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    angelchaser commented on Deserted

    12-27-2010

    This poem will leave my computer screen, it will seem so bland with it gone. Perhaps I'll read this again someday, like returning to a favorite song. I sent you an invite, I hope you accept, as I would love to talk with you. Who would'nt want to speak with a lady, who writes as beautifully as you^^.
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    elmofreak4u

    01/05/2011

    I accepted your invite. Sorry it took me so long to respond. Thanks so much for the wonderful comment. I'm glad to hear from someone that enjoys my poetry as much as I enjoy writing it. Feel free to read the rest and comment freely. Talk to you soon.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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