Dedication to my godmother

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    Dedication to my godmother

    This is a sad fact that's now perfectly known
    I can never bare children of my own.

    I ask God why but he doesn't give an answer
    I will never heard my child's cry or happy laughter.

    This thing has taken over my whole body
    causing pain and stress ever so constantly.

    I want to cry but no tears will come out
    I'll never know what mothering is all about.

    Godchildren aren't bad but it's not quite enough
    dealing with this kind of pains makes my soul erupt.

    I can never bring children into this world
    but my Goddaughter is still my own special baby girl.

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    mistyparish commented on Dedication to my godmother

    03-23-2009

    This is very good. At one time I thought that I would have no children but, god blessed me with a beautiful baby boy in 2005

    28jimmy commented on Dedication to my godmother

    03-22-2009

    ok, i like this one

    fennesse commented on Dedication to my godmother

    03-19-2009

    do you know just how special you r? everything has a reason and a place U may very well be the best mentor ur Goddaughter will ever have.AND UR DEFINTLY DEEP U GOT THAT FIRE POETRY LADY I.

    MzGlamore07 commented on Dedication to my godmother

    03-19-2009

    i love it nd i can relate 2 100 percent... i love my god-kids but nuthinz lyke ur own...GREAT JOB!!

    Domib7 commented on Dedication to my godmother

    03-18-2009

    i dont get it

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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