Challenge your strength

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    Challenge your strength

    It seems when one storm is over another occurs.
    What is our purpose in this God given world?
    Your body goes through mental and emotional changes your mind cant deplete.
    Suddenly you slip into a feel of desperate defeat.
    You feel you can no longer stand it or you'll go insane.
    The pressure is causing malfunctions in your brain.
    But you tell yourself to be humble stay strong and be bold.
    For after every storm is a rainbow ending with a pot of gold.
    I'm going to end it on this note but correct me if I'm wrong.
    After every challenging encounter don't you personally feel strong?

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    caspiancri commented on Challenge your strength

    04-06-2009

    very nice poem written beautifully

    GingerBenjamin commented on Challenge your strength

    04-02-2009

    very good very mture

    fennesse commented on Challenge your strength

    03-20-2009

    Yes indeed. keep it up ma.

    chadallac74 commented on Challenge your strength

    03-04-2009

    Very nice writing. Keep up the good work! Now I am gonna read "Ghetto..."

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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