dead boys don't cry

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    deadboysdontcry: I hope this helps someone.

    dead boys don't cry

    No tears will leave these eyes
    No matter how hard he tries
    For dead boys can't cry
    Though they feel still
    They can never be allowed to live
    Thats what the people told me
    So I came to the conclusion
    when you never were you can never be
    So you see I knew I was dead inside
    The pain I felt inside cause my cheeks remain dry
    leaves my body as cold as I feel  
    It's as If all I hold is warm as I remain numb 
    I've been put down and tossed around
    Forsaken beaten and left bleeding 
    But still I am left with no tears 
    Just wounds that have yet to heal
    I travel through this world as a ghost 
    unseen and hardly missed 
    I ask Is this it? Am I never to know nothing more?
    But one thing I know dead boys don't cry 
    Looking towards heaven those words
    in mind a single drop hits my eye 
    As the water follows down I realize I'm not dead yet 

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    gmcookie commented on dead boys don't cry

    10-24-2010

    Deadboy, someday you will meet that special person who will make you feel more explosively alive than a springtime day. Then they will rip your heart out and make you wish that you were dead again... hehe But, you know, that is what love (and life) is all about. It is the exhilaration and the pain taken together that let us know we are alive. And excellent write, my friend. Don't give up. Beat heart beat, and lungs breathe, synapses fire at will! Take no prisoners but, brook no pause but fight to take that hill.... (hey, I just wrote a little poem. Maybe I can make something out of that... hehe)
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    Deadboysdontcry

    11/11/2010

    Thank you so much for your comment lol and I cant wait for love to rip my heart out lol and I likw your poem in a comment :-)

    nini2323 commented on dead boys don't cry

    11-15-2009

    That is an amazing write, I love the whole thought behind it and the realization that you are alive...make the most of it you only get to do it once.
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    Deadboysdontcry

    11/11/2010

    thank you

    ListninEar commented on dead boys don't cry

    11-05-2009

    many, many young men feel this way. Unseen, not mattering, as though they must already be dead cause they feel nothing. I like the end. I hope that (if this is based on your own feelings and not just an expression) that you find healing and deeper meaning in life! Hopefully, it's just the beginning!
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    Deadboysdontcry

    12/02/2009

    thank you so much i hope so too!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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