Creativity II

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This poem is just like Creativity II. I have learned a lot from the first poem and trying to express my feelings. This I written after MJ's memorial and death. Something just hit me in the head and it's still stuck in my head "Dare to dream". I love somebody who is inspirational and motivational and is enduring forever, but not someone who would hesitate at anything. Although, something else has made me to move on to be a stronger person. So, poetry/songs/movies/stories are my chain of creativity. I love my creativeness and I can eat everyday with it. And yes, Michael Jackson, you are the master of creativity. TY, brother/lover/friend.

Love,
Dan
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Creativity II

A pink cappuccino for a day/A lot of love that blends into it/A lot of peace that surrounds me when I drink it/On a sunny pink day/Nothing like a storm/It makes you fall asleep/When there is so much going on/But only one thing I know of/I can’t wait to get in my own bed/I surely wish I was in my own place where I can have my own space/This creative thing it runs through my veins/All the dreams I have are lined up ready to go/I guess I don’t have any fear/And maybe I do/What is this list in my hand?/Where did it come from?/Things are ready and listed/Waiting for me to accomplish them/I don’t know what’s first or what’s last/It’s like what MJ said “Dare to dream”/Look in between those lines and what do you see?/You see a possibility ready to be open up/The rest of the lines are made history/Things that are already done; they’ve been checked off/When you look back, you have memories/When you look forward, you are trying to make a goal/You look at any direction/You are looking for a path to lead you/You might not understand it/You’ll be just fine if you ask/If you don’t ask, you can run into problems/Maybe your intuition is right/Maybe it is wrong/In my soul, I can only live my life the way I want it to be/Never let it make you/You become the leader, but not the follower/You can transform/You can transverse/If you walk on the edge, will you fall off?/If you live on it, will it be dangerous?/Do you take chances in life?/Maybe these things are not my problem/But I live on the edge just to see what happens/Maybe I’ll take a chance just to make it challenging/But I won’t let fear get to me/To catch me in its web/Love surrounds me like a safety suit/Ready to rescue me at anytime/Somewhat lost but never found/But again to be found/This thing in my veins it can lift me up/The artistic ability that it carries/It can be powerful/It seems not to be/At a point when it goes nowhere/But it only got me somewhere/Bit by bit/Little by little/Every step going forward/Maybe it is the chance to take a different route/Adventure/Romance/Action/Horror/But it is still a journey/Like it said “Inner Sanctum”/Freedom is my favorite key I like to hold/Every time I open it up/I am free/Every time there is a chance I’m good at something that I do/Besides H.S. diploma/I am more than this/But unless I’m on my two feet/I believe that in myself I will accomplish something/There is so many things on this list/Very small things are so small/Big things are so big/These things that are lined up are ready to go/They are ready for me to try new things/I don’t have much of a clue/But the smaller things seem easier than those big things/What if I skip some of those things?/Will it make me happy or sad or angry?/Or will I get in trouble?/No, because these things are freewill and these are my dreams/These are things I can and will conquer/These things I can look back on when I grow old/These things I can be the leader/I can command some things off of it too/Some things not to bother/Some things are fun to do/To try is to triumph/In order to succeed/This key I hold in my heart/These are the abilities of freewill/And I, Danielle pledge to accomplish some of these things/Dream little or dream big/I, will only be/I ought to fight for/If I take center stage/If some things don’t get accomplish/There is no time for that/Just go forward and turn away/Wear a safety suit everyday

 

LOVE,

DANI

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Lolee commented on Creativity II

11-18-2009

I don't know how you managed to do another one of these! They are so different, and interesting! Good job...good therapy for the writer too.

coolcat09

11/19/2009

The second one is like the first one. I love listing things.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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