Creativity I

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I hope you like my first poem I written this is one of the poems I written long time ago. I had to get it out and the best way was to type it out when I was on the computer. I sometimes write my poems, but I prefer to by the way. Because writing is my way to express how I feel about things. I intend to list things, which I love to do in my poems. Some poems turn into songs, which I don't mind being a songwriter. I just hope I find the right voice for the song.

Dani

Creativity I

Imagination/love/hate/peace/violence/everyone is a winner/if a person is left then he or she is a loser/

Music/art/coffee/Starbucks/water/fitness/nutrition/small and medium size/I wish I was back to 110 pounds/

I loved my thin figure/I could get into anything if I wanted to/sorry can’t do at 150.5 pounds/I’ll get there time to time/

Gay guys marrying/while others rape others/but I hope you do it for love/not just because someone told you so/

People waiting in long lines/just to pay their grocery bill/wondering if the economy is going to get better soon/patience/

Men having affairs/who would know who it would be/it’s just like a Jerry Springer show/same old thing plays a fool

Like they would say “Snooze you lose”/like you would say “I don’t give a damn”/love triangles/flying kites/airplanes

My imaginary little city…Tekkven/cartoon characters/many poems waiting to be written/I don’t know who they are/

But they are there/probably every poet waiting to read the next one

Don’t say that you can’t when you can/because you will/don’t sleep when in danger/always stay alert

Keep your friends close and your enemies closer/so ugly when up close/what a big mess/when it isn’t art

How friends can keep you awake/when it is art/and they clean up the mess/

I walk alone/I sail my own boat/I drive my own car/I live in my own house/by myself/I work for myself on my own

I trust only me/I make my own decisions/I am the manager for me/I am the creator to create it myself/

My heart is my support/love is what gives me courage/faith encourages to move on/hope is the fear I live for/

And I’m ready to fall off the edge/to learn about the new things in life/a chance to see something before I die

I’ll be flying out of here/I’ll fly so high that no one can’t touch me/I’ll come back to the ground to visit some people I know/But the people I don’t know are on their own/I’ll take the chances in life to do things for me/And then I’ll live in the sea

 

DANI

PEACE & LOVE

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Lolee commented on Creativity I

11-18-2009

That felt like a fast, cyber-flash interview....and I read it all! ........................Fun!.....................Ten!...........................Cool!

coolcat09

11/19/2009

I made a list of things I see everyday and wrote it as a poem.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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