Creation

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Creation

I just opened my eyes, im screaming loudly with cries,
I cant see, everything’s blurry to me-
My lungs are so tight, I just came from the dark, why things are so bright-
Im coughing and choking, blood running down in a watery motion-
Im kicking and screaming, who are these people im seeing-
What is that object they using to cut and fix me,
When am I going back to my home that bliss me-
Who is this person in front of me that’s blurry, my eye tricks me-
If I never return to my home, I want to let the next person that lives there to know, be careful cuz things are risky-
They fixing me up, cleaning me down, I guess my old place is leaving me now-
Everything’s clearing; I don’t understand language im hearing-
People are just staring at me, smiling at me, its obvious there happy-
Ok, now what is this you wrap me with, I don’t understand these people and there happiness-
They lay me down next to this beautiful person that lay-
It was my mother, and this is how I was born that day-

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Radeyah commented on Creation

06-03-2009

that was so beautiful! I'm truly at a lost for words. that was the sweetest thing ive ever read it truly touched my heart.

troy30344

06/06/2009

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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