Confusing, Twisted, Torn

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    Poem Commentary

    This is a poem i wrote just recently about someone in my family that was very looked up to and practically raised me was found out to be a horrible person, who molested and cause nothing but problems..

    Confusing, Twisted, Torn

     Anger Emotion,
    Darkness Sets In,
    Questioning Life,
    Obeying The Sin.

    Deny Thy Father,
    Refuse Thy Name,
    Forever His Life,
    Will Cast Your Shame.

    Grawing Pain,
    Won't Subside,
    Forever Feeling,
    Shameful Pride.

    Swinging Fist,
    Self Defense,
    All With Lack,
    Of Consequence.

    The Thoughts,
    The Fears,
    The Questions,
    Cause Tears.

    Knowledge Is Strength,
    Yet Weakness Pursued,
    Painful Thoughts,
    Not Quickly Subdued.

    Happy Thoughts,
    Of Childhood Bliss,
    Are Not For All,
    Who's Childhoods Missed,

    Thank you For Nothing,
    Thank You For all,
    Now I watch,
    As The Legend Falls,

    Once The Glue,
    That Held Us Tight,
    Now The Pain,
    We Can't Make Right,

    Drakness Invades,
    A Lighted Heart,
    All You've Done,
    Is Tear A Family Apart.

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    ArizonaPlay commented on Confusing, Twisted, Torn

    04-17-2011

    one in the same, same in the all, we might walk same paths but we all walk it differently and it's always comforting to often ffel you not the only one....
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    Paolo commented on Confusing, Twisted, Torn

    07-13-2009

    The pain you feel is most evident in the words you chose. I am sorry that this situation is so painful for you, but I am glad you are able to write about it.
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    dual commented on Confusing, Twisted, Torn

    07-13-2009

    Very nice! the rythm of this poem enhances the emotion. Well done.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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