Clouds of Eternity

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    Clouds of Eternity
    The clouds of day,
    so dark and gray,
    Blocking the sun
    and stopping the fun,
    but blow the wind
    as I sit and it bends,
    my hair cascading around me,
    this is what it is to be
    caught up in the beautiful serenity,
    that will last for an eternity

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    windowguy commented on Clouds of Eternity

    01-09-2010

    Superb title. Interesting poem, however, i feel it could have been longer with more visuals. Still, perhaps you intended it to be so.
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    alejapoet commented on Clouds of Eternity

    03-05-2009

    I can always relate to a spoken word that is and has been a reality in the lives of so many. Pain-love-sadness-tribulations-sex and love are so deep and dramatic in our lives and you have expressed this so deeply in your words which is a real reality. Author Aleja Bennett http://alejabennett.net84.net http://myspace.com/authoralejabennett
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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