Close Your Eyes and Dream

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    Close Your Eyes and Dream
    Close your eyes and dream
    Don't worry about a thing
    Let the pain dull away
    And the fear will pass you bye

    Your heart has gone astray
    For the deadly poison lives within
    But planted by your flesh and blood
    And condemned to a place of solitude

    Truth resides in your angel's eyes
    It is there in your lonely voice
    Yet all they hear is silence
    Lies that they should not believe

    Close your eyes and dream
    It will be alright
    Let the fear pass you by
    And you will be free one day

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    graceladymn commented on Close Your Eyes and Dream

    08-22-2009

    You need more depth to fill this piece out and make it plausible, lot of material in there you could take in many directions.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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