Chaos

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  • Confusion
    • Kandrew
    • is so sorry she's been away so long! Trying desperately to catch up!

    Chaos

    i have often wondered
    where the strong winds come from

    i think it must begin at the place
    where small breezes meet
    then fight for the space there

    and in their passion for dominance
    create the chaos
    which throws my hair into my mouth
    brings tears to my eyes

    and leaves me standing there
    in awe of the power
    of something i cannot see

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    Hiporlacking commented on Chaos

    07-18-2009

    In my head I pictured crashing waves in the ocean with some heavy guitar riffs. Nice job.

    tpff commented on Chaos

    05-02-2009

    I like this.It seems to hit a cord within

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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