Broken

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    This is the essence of life, if you don't understand now someday you will

    Broken
    The beauty of the broken,
    forever unspoken,
    the words of tomorrow,
    lie in elegant sorrow.

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    TheBean commented on Broken

    01-16-2010

    wow. hats my one word for you. wow. great word choice it really captures emotion
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    MichaelTierney

    01/16/2010

    thank you, your wordless state is a true compliment. the poem did for you what it did to me.

    Lizziewriter27 commented on Broken

    01-16-2010

    Wow...how do you do that...its like in those few words you captured a million.
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    MichaelTierney

    01/16/2010

    I know I have never been able to duplicate it, a poem quite so short with so much raw power. Then again that poem was the summation of years of thought about life and swept in on the wings of inspiration. I have to remember to let go and relax; to just let it flow out of me.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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