Bridge of Life

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Bridge of Life

if something devastating happened in your life

just look the other way

it may be hard but theres nothing you can do to change it

why go back and mope

when you can go forward and make it a memorie

just keep walking over that bridge of life

and make the most of the life you have

not the one you had

If i was lost i would walk toward the light not the dark

so in my life im gonna walk ntowards the future not the past

im just gonna keep walking foward on my bridge of life

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ginga commented on Bridge of Life

11-05-2009

bunny, Now this poem has some substance. Not quite a poetic style yet. There's self-expression as you would write in a personal account of your views/ feelings. It is a good start however. Keep moving forward and read lots of poetry. Read any of the old dead poets you like, contemporary poets too, and poets on OP, even us old ones. There's so much to offer here. You will improve as you practice? ginga

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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