Breath

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Breath

It comes to us in love

Its gone from us in hate

When it goes we’ll never know

But that day is your final date

Could this be my last one?

 

 

On that day May 2nd

It all was given to me

But I’ve been told June 5th

This gift will no longer be

Could this be my last one?

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knight4696 commented on Breath

02-28-2010

Knightpoems - Nice pen-name. I might be a little biased though. :) Nice debut. Al lot being actually said here in so few words, and the flow and rhyme are both superb. Nice Job. :) Ken

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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