BRAND NEW DAWN

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    BRAND NEW DAWN



    In the quiet night I hear her cry

    What nightmares stalk her dreams

    Shadows cast befor she was born

    What on earth are we living for

    Far away from daylight

    In the desolate part of town

    No one hears your cry's

    On an Earth grown tired

    When will the sadness ever end

    When will all the tears run dry

    When will their be sunshine again

    will the future show mercy to the innocence of youth

    Once the land was beautifull

    Once the land was good

    Then along came evil and we all stood

    Happy in our ignorance of the truth

    Their's not much hope my darling child

    These sins of man have gone to far

    But i shall pray for you and wish upon a star

    I shall pray that one day you shall walk in a

    BRAND NEW DAWN

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    kdarcy commented on BRAND NEW DAWN

    04-21-2009

    Nice piece, sad but true and also hopeful. More a prose/poetic style I think, but I like it. You be you, enjoy your writing and keep sharing. Thats what I'm going to do , you feedback would be most appreciated, thanks

    Amina commented on BRAND NEW DAWN

    04-09-2009

    I enjoy this style of poetry which is similiar to my own. Heartfelt... Good

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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