Beyond Love

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    • peacesmoker
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    Beyond Love

    As the summer sky is blue,
    my love for you is true,
    to hear you say you love me is wonderful times two,
    the way I kiss her lips takes my mind on a trip,
    to a romantic place so for away,
    a beautiful place where the grass is green everyday,
    and on that grass our bodies lay,
    my heart loves her in every way,
    in this place there is a tree,
    and under the tree lye her and me,
    the birds fly right above our heads,
    "this place is so amazing" is what she said,
    I told her "my love I agree," 
    and then she turned over and looked at me,
    the stair was one I didn't want to end, 
    so beautiful she was my special friend, 
    just the two of us all alone, 
    never wanting the kiss to end,
    never wanting to go home, 
    our lips came apart,
    and I knew right then,
    that I would give anything to go
    back to that amazing place again.

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    strawberryskiss commented on Beyond Love

    08-18-2011

    Love this one as well. It's such a beautiful to see a man express his feeling. That's just beautiful.

    sincere commented on Beyond Love

    08-27-2009

    Wow, your girl whoever she is, is really lucky. She probably hears stuff like that fom you everyday. I just hope you are SINCERE in what you say. Good poem

    peacesmoker

    08/27/2009

    thanks preety baby, but that poem is right off the top of my dome

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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