The Dark Avenger

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  • peacesmoker
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The Dark Avenger

A man of the night,
a man of might,
a destructive psychopath,
there’s no hope in site,
stand in his way,
and you soon shall see,
so much of your own blood it could feel a sea,
stair in his eye's and you shall see no more,
bow your head as he comes to your door,
he demands respect or he demands your neck,
he walks around with his blade of death,
driven off the pain he’s' felt,
trying to play the that cards he was dealt,
so dark his soul just like his belt,
the love in his heart that was their in the start,
is no longer their he no longer cares,
the only thing that really matters,
is to make you fear,
to make you scatter,
to bash your brain's to make them splatter,
his eyes blood red,
his hair of flames,
your soul he'll drain,
this sounds insane,
but its true,
Dark Avenger his name.

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TheAngelOfDeath commented on The Dark Avenger

07-27-2009

Oh but the Dark Avenger shall do more than just take your life. He will rip your soul from your body and make you one with Nothing!

peacesmoker

07/27/2009

i like that

theguider commented on The Dark Avenger

07-23-2009

YOU DID SOME TIGHT RYHMES THERE,AND THAT WAS COOL,THANKS FOR THIS HOPE TO READ MORE

peacesmoker

07/27/2009

thanks man got that one error in their,makes me mad cant evern change it. but thanks man

kittman101 commented on The Dark Avenger

07-23-2009

awesome, i love the flow. although the words are pretty dark, i love the mental description you have here and look forward to reading your poems

peacesmoker

07/27/2009

thanks man got that one error in their, cant even change it makes me mad, but thanks man.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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