Back Row

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    Back Row
    Sometimes I want not to be expected to perform
    I would rather sit in the back row
    Completely alone
    Lights out
    Stage empty
    And attempt to imagine what others see and feel as I showcase my
    facade
    And have them believe what I myself cannot see

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    brandon commented on Back Row

    03-19-2009

    wow
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    causeofbalance commented on Back Row

    03-12-2009

    this is very relatable to your hide and seek poem because i think it deals greatly with your comfort zone. i do the same thing, imagine a conversation and its outcomes, then model the actual thing around how it went in my head. do you ever take it further than your imagination? you are intelligent i can tell, you need more confidence in your skills. take it past your imagination sometime. another good one :)
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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