Angel's Don't Cry

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    Angel's Don't Cry

    Dear Jesus
    Can I be an angel
    What can I do
    I want to go to heaven
    Do you need me too
    I promise I'll be good
    I'll dance around your throne
    Mommy won't even notice
    That I'm gone

    Angel's don't bleed
    Or do they cry
    They bounce cloud to cloud
    On wings that fly
    Angel's don't hurt
    From a body black and blue
    Jesus, please take me
    To heaven with you

    Angel's aren't scared
    They don't feel no pain
    They don't lay on sheets
    With crimstone bloodstains
    Angel's don't have bruises
    Or cry in the night
    Angel's don't hide in closets
    To keep out of sight

    Angel's don't hurt
    From a body black and blue
    Jesus, please take me
    To heaven with you

    Amen

    (C) Linda Hill

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    am2anangel commented on Angel's Don't Cry

    05-29-2009

    Amazing poem very well written. It's sad to realize that there are children out there suffering abuse that may very well be saying the words in your poem Your poetic flow is marvelous.
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    countrypoet commented on Angel's Don't Cry

    03-09-2009

    I can relate to this poem as I am a survivor of abuse myself.Very well written poem about a difficult subject.
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    kid221 commented on Angel's Don't Cry

    02-06-2009

    It's me again just looking over poems I'm new to this but u have great talent.U seem like u r hurting alot I know u don't know me but I live my life 4 the Lord but if u want to talk I'm here
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    Realistic commented on Angel's Don't Cry

    01-29-2009

    Oh! this one shakes me to my core. Very well written, Bravo!
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    AcA commented on Angel's Don't Cry

    01-29-2009

    Thats not what G-d intented for His angels, but it happens none-the-less.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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