And The Sun Will Shine For You

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  • TiffanyH
  • is chillin @ home alone listening 2 music....

And The Sun Will Shine For You

So it is goodbye?
It is time to set you free?
It is time to let it fly?
Is it time to let it bleed?

We used to take turns
To cover up the pain
Deep belowit burns
And the feelin' still remains

You're ganna find someone new
I really hope you do
Cause i love you

And the sun will come on thru,
It's ganna shine for you
Cause i adore you

Yes we gave it a try
But maybe for too long
Out of every sorrow
Anouther day will down

And the road travels on
But im still near you
In my life, like a song
I will still hear you

THE SUN WILL SHINE FOR YOU
CAUSE I ADORE YOU....

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jam4muzic commented on And The Sun Will Shine For You

08-08-2009

Hm...it's ohkay. Can't say there's nothing terrible. The ending two stanzas didn't feel like it flowed. Hm...not sure. But, anyway, mind checking out my poems? I'd like to know toher opinions...

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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