“Two Twelve”

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Sitting and thinking can produce...late thoughts! Two Twelve was one of those in the middle of the night thoughts. The kind you just can't shake... I believe you will pcik it up as you read.

“Two Twelve”

              

Its two twelve

and though that is the date

                                     and not the time,

it’s still raining, a midnight rain…

 

The streets are cold

 and the night seems so lonely.

Signs swaying in the breeze…

 

Cars pass by-fast and unknown,

 unaware of my piercing eyes.

Sometimes I wonder – the strangers,

 behind the wheel;

 

are they heading home, to greet company?

 or leaving unwanted despair?

 

I know how my eyes felt,

 late two twelve…

          and as the rain still falls,

that “midnight rain”.

 

I wonder just how my clouds will pass.

When I find myself facing,

                          two thirteen…

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Jeffrey Byron Queenan

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Grito commented on “Two Twelve”

01-18-2010

You will feel like the date six twenty three in beautiful spring!!!

JeffBQ

01/18/2010

Thank you Grito for the confidence...I did make it pass that date and this are doing so much better ;-)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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