ACCOMPLISHED

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ACCOMPLISHED

There comes a time in your life
Where you feel broken inside
The needs and the wants
Become something that taunts
Gravely hearing those whispers and the laughter
Knowing all along there is something you are after
Just beyond the threshhold it lies
But the instinct to reach out for it dies
Your left wondering why you got so far and gave up
Now all you want is for people to simply shut up
Because all they do is spread the rumors and gossip
While all you can do is sit back and watch it
Then one day that desire to get what you wanted in the first place
Hits you like a ton of bricks right in the face
You take whats rightfully yours because youve worked so hard to get it
Instantly you feel ACCOMPLISHED now that you did it
You sit back and relax and enjoy the view
While the poeple try to spawn a new you.


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xXxJustMexXx commented on ACCOMPLISHED

05-03-2010

i like this one. its a change from the rest of your poems. but a good change. it shows postive instead of negative. :) i really like it.

thecross commented on ACCOMPLISHED

05-01-2010

An uplifting write about drive and desire, well done.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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