A Wishful Thinker

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    A Wishful Thinker

     I wish I had the answers ,that would help her sleep at night.

    I wish I had the answers, that would make whats wrong alright

    If only I had the answers, that would make her see like me

    If only I had the answers, that would finally set her free.

    I wish I had the answers, that would fill her heart with hope.

    I wish i had the answers , that empowered her to cope.

    If only i had the answers , to take away her pain .

    If only I had the answers, that shows shes still sain.

    I wish I had the answers , so she would'nt have to cry .

    I wish I had the answers , to help her say goodbye!!


                                      Carla Mason
                                           09-2009
                               

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    llsnook commented on A Wishful Thinker

    11-08-2009

    Only one word can describe this poem; WOW! I know your daughter will someday read this and know that you always have and always will put her first.
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    knight4696 commented on A Wishful Thinker

    11-06-2009

    Carla - you certainly have a way with words! I love the style and flow of this poem and the repetative I wish I ...... Great job!
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    cjmason

    11/07/2009

    I just start writing and this is some of the stuff that comes out on paper so thanks again

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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