Your Love

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    Your Love

     Your love is like a rain storm
    Landing on a dry and barren land.

    Reviving life and giving hope
    To a heart that has long been dead.

    Your honesty is refreshing
    Just like a morning rain.

    Cleansing as it falls on me
    Washing away the lies of my past.

    Your passion is like a lightning storm
    Blazing through the sky.

    Sending electricity straight through me
    Reaching places within me I've never found.

    Your gentleness is like a light summer sprinkle
    Soothing and healing me as it falls over me.

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    kdarcy commented on Your Love

    12-13-2010

    That was a pleasant read, it had a nice flow, not to hard to feel, I liked it, be well k
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    spbsdude commented on Your Love

    09-20-2010

    As I read this I wonder if it is the love of man that is so healing, or the love of God. Mankind wounds, while God heals, so I go for the latter.
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    spbsdude commented on Your Love

    04-06-2010

    True love can be so healing. It can raise one's spirit and heal a weary life. Nice poem.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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